I have crept out of my bed and met my lovers in the dark of night. I am cautious. My breath stops in my throat at every creak of the floorboards in the bedroom above my studio. Does my husband sense he is alone?
Sounds like a trashy novel.
My lovers are these:
Adding more color and defining the focal point of the top painting. The painting with circles gets scales to help suggest motion and to add texture.
Here are the beginnings of each:
The top painting has the focal point pretty near the center and that's generally not where I want it to be. I will probably make some adjustments later to draw the eye slightly to the right of center.
The scales painting will get a transparent layer of color over the scales outside of the circles so that there is texture there but the eye is not immediately drawn to it.